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  1. Posted: April 2, 2020In: SciFi

    When a peaceful young man from the hard streets of gangland Los Angeles accidentally travels through time and witnesses his grandfather commit murder, he fights to change the past without becoming as violent as his neighborhood. Note: Series pilot for an hour-long drama.

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    Added an answer on April 3, 2020 at 2:00 am

    What special twist, unique take does this take on the time traveling trope that hasn't already been explored in other films?What is at stake for the protagonist?? He may want to stop his grandfather from committing murder.? But in drama that's not good enough.? He needs to stop the murder; he MUST uRead more

    What special twist, unique take does this take on the time traveling trope that hasn’t already been explored in other films?

    What is at stake for the protagonist?? He may want to stop his grandfather from committing murder.? But in drama that’s not good enough.? He needs to stop the murder; he MUST undo the past — or else.

    Well, or else what?? What is the do-or-die, life-or-death reason why he MUST undo the past?

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  2. Posted: April 2, 2020In: Drama

    When a war veteran suffering PTSD goes on a rampage in the woods, his brother joins up with his friends to hunt him down – and must get to him first before the others kill him.

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    Added an answer on April 3, 2020 at 1:49 am

    >>>These ?friends? are all gung-ho, trigger happy and perhaps just as worse as the war-vet-suffering-ptsd. ...it becomes increasingly clear the others will murder him and perform a ?necessary evil?. Have you read? or heard of "Achilles in Vietnam"? of "Odysseus in America" both by JonathanRead more

    >>>These ?friends? are all gung-ho, trigger happy and perhaps just as worse as the war-vet-suffering-ptsd. …it becomes increasingly clear the others will murder him and perform a ?necessary evil?.

    Have you read? or heard of “Achilles in Vietnam”? of “Odysseus in America” both by Jonathan Shay, staff shrink in the Veterans Department.? The books are based upon his therapeutic work with hundreds of Vietnam Vets who suffered acute, chronic PTSD.?? Not movie version vets, but the genuine vets. Strongly recommend.

    IMHO, Vietnam is so yesterday.? Who cares anymore? Today’s veteran? and war movies are? set in the context of the endless wars in the Middle East.

    What knowledge of the Vietnam War do most people living today have about that war??? What emotional connection do you expect a contemporary audience to have with either the situation or the characters??? What new insight, what unique perspective does this story bring to the plight of Vietnam Vets that hasn’t been explored in any of other Vietnam war era films?

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2020In: Drama

    When a war veteran suffering PTSD goes on a rampage in the woods, his brother joins up with his friends to hunt him down – and must get to him first before the others kill him.

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    Added an answer on April 3, 2020 at 1:02 am

    Why will his "friends" murder him?? Why won't the do the more rational and common sense act of notifying the brother (by cellphone) that they've located him so he can join them and defuse the situation?? (I use "friends" in quotes because what kind of friends are they if they intend to kill a his brRead more

    Why will his “friends” murder him?? Why won’t the do the more rational and common sense act of notifying the brother (by cellphone) that they’ve located him so he can join them and defuse the situation?? (I use “friends” in quotes because what kind of friends are they if they intend to kill a his brother?)

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