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After a police station is attacked, a supernatural mercenary in custody must work with mundane cops to defend it from a group of faeries seeking the powerful artifact she stole.
What's ?the peculiar power of the artifact that it needs to be protected from the bad faeries? ?IOW: the stakes."Raiders of the Lost Ark" wasn't just about recovering the Ark of the Covenant because it was a legendary and sacred object. ?The stakes were that the Nazis wanted to harness its supernatuRead more
What’s ?the peculiar power of the artifact that it needs to be protected from the bad faeries? ?IOW: the stakes.
“Raiders of the Lost Ark” wasn’t just about recovering the Ark of the Covenant because it was a legendary and sacred object. ?The stakes were that the Nazis wanted to harness its supernatural power to create an invincible army. ?The stakes were the outcome of the next World War.
And it was also part of the hook.
What do you conceive as your story hook? ?And what are the stakes? ?What do the good guys stand to lose if the bad guys get a hold of the artifact?
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As others have said. ?What's the inciting incident? ?Why after all these years, does he do a 180 and decide to amend his wicked ways?And who/what opposes him? ?Who or what makes it difficult for him to make amends? What are the stakes, the jeopardy he places himself in by making amends?
As others have said. ?
What’s the inciting incident? ?Why after all these years, does he do a 180 and decide to amend his wicked ways?
And who/what opposes him? ?Who or what makes it difficult for him to make amends? What are the stakes, the jeopardy he places himself in by making amends?
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