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  1. Posted: April 21, 2017In: Drama

    Invincible

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 22, 2017 at 1:35 am

    If she can control people's minds -- including the doctor who "gifted" her with that supernatural power -- what's to stop her from doing whatever she wants to whomever she wants to exact revenge, get justice or whatever? ?Like the title says, she's invincible.And being invincible, there is no obstacRead more

    If she can control people’s minds — including the doctor who “gifted” her with that supernatural power — what’s to stop her from doing whatever she wants to whomever she wants to exact revenge, get justice or whatever? ?Like the title says, she’s invincible.

    And being invincible, there is no obstacle ?or threat that can stop her from doing whatever she wants to do. ?Which is to say, the story seems to lack the important dramatic element of suspense.?

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  2. Posted: April 20, 2017In: Drama

    After shy high school girl’heart treatment goes wrong and as result she develops supernatural ability of mind control,she must fight to expose the doctor who caused her transformation

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 21, 2017 at 1:43 am

    Both?? Has he acquired the supernatural ability too? Whatever, I still don't understand how exposing the doctor is? going to make her normal again.? Can the mistake be undone?? Or must she learn to live with it?

    Both?? Has he acquired the supernatural ability too?

    Whatever, I still don’t understand how exposing the doctor is? going to make her normal again.? Can the mistake be undone?? Or must she learn to live with it?

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2017In: Drama

    After shy high school girl’heart treatment goes wrong and as result she develops supernatural ability of mind control,she must fight to expose the doctor who caused her transformation

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 21, 2017 at 1:23 am

    Why would she want to expose someone who "accidentally" gave her what most people what think is a fabulous supernatural ability to have, accidentally or otherwise?? What am I missing here?? I don't understand her motivation. And even if she succeeds in exposing the doctor, what difference will thatRead more

    Why would she want to expose someone who “accidentally” gave her what most people what think is a fabulous supernatural ability to have, accidentally or otherwise?? What am I missing here?? I don’t understand her motivation.

    And even if she succeeds in exposing the doctor, what difference will that make in having or using her supernatural ability?? What’s the real dramatic problem she has to deal with — the doctor — or her supernatural ability?

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