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  1. Posted: March 28, 2017In: Comedy

    POOL PARTY – When the humiliating pranking of an overweight loser during a high school pep rally goes viral, he decides to face his insecurities and his bullies in 3 months at the annual summer pool party hosted by the most popular girl in school.

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    Added an answer on March 28, 2017 at 7:01 am

    The logline has a good inciting incident although it can be condensed.But?"face his insecurities" relates to his subjective problem. The logline should tell us how he intends to to face his foe -- his antagonist, ?his external problem, the aggravating external cause of his insecurity.

    The logline has a good inciting incident although it can be condensed.

    But?”face his insecurities” relates to his subjective problem. The logline should tell us how he intends to to face his foe — his antagonist, ?his external problem, the aggravating external cause of his insecurity.

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  2. Posted: March 27, 2017In: Examples

    -A retired Police officer hires two thieves to capture a cruel dacoit to take personal revenge

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    Added an answer on March 28, 2017 at 6:57 am

    It goes without saying that nothing is what it seems in drama. ?So it's unnecessary to say so.

    It goes without saying that nothing is what it seems in drama.

    ?So it’s unnecessary to say so.

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  3. Posted: March 27, 2017In: Examples

    -A retired Police officer hires two thieves to capture a cruel dacoit to take personal revenge

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    Added an answer on March 28, 2017 at 5:02 am

    >>Not that my ignorance of a word meaning is an excuse The normal rule. But there are exceptions. I take this story to be tailored to a specific movie production market, India and Southeast Asia. And I presume the producers/directors in India would have no problem with the word.

    >>Not that my ignorance of a word meaning is an excuse

    The normal rule. But there are exceptions. I take this story to be tailored to a specific movie production market, India and Southeast Asia. And I presume the producers/directors in India would have no problem with the word.

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