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Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must cooperate with an alien rebels to find a way home.
Are the "alien rebels' rebelling against homo sapiens or against another space species? ?If the latter, then what's the dramatic problem? ?If the former, why would the rebels cooperate with a species they are rebelling against?The plot line sets up a situation, but I'm not sure what is the dramaticRead more
Are the “alien rebels’ rebelling against homo sapiens or against another space species? ?If the latter, then what’s the dramatic problem? ?If the former, why would the rebels cooperate with a species they are rebelling against?
The plot line sets up a situation, but I’m not sure what is the dramatic problem (the relationship between the 2 species) that arises on top of the initial dramatic problem (lost in space).
See lessAfter being framed for assault, an indigenous basketballer from the Australian outback, must prove himself innocent before his scholarship to play for a college in the USA expires.
>>>It?s funny you say aboriginal Australian because that?s exactly what he is. I just didn?t find it necessary to add into the logline as it stood. I think it is essential, part of the story hook. And it certainly matters when it comes to casting.
>>>It?s funny you say aboriginal Australian because that?s exactly what he is. I just didn?t find it necessary to add into the logline as it stood.
I think it is essential, part of the story hook.
And it certainly matters when it comes to casting.
See lessThe hunter becomes the hunted when a woman lures her abusive husband into a death trap. (Short Script, 7pages)
A woman lures her abusive husband into a death trap.It's only a 7 page script, folks. ?Nowhere near enough space in which to cram in all the usual plot points. ?The inciting incident is implied in the ?husband's?description as "abusive". ? The dramatic question is: ?will she succeed in killing him?WRead more
A woman lures her abusive husband into a death trap.
It’s only a 7 page script, folks. ?Nowhere near enough space in which to cram in all the usual plot points. ?The inciting incident is implied in the ?husband’s?description as “abusive”. ? The dramatic question is: ?will she succeed in killing him?
What more is there to ?say about the plot? What more needs to be said about a 7 page script?
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