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When her traditional father sets an impossible ultimatum a week before her wedding, a Nigerian-American and her Latina best friend must travel to Australia to achieve it without destroying their friendship.
What is the impossible ultimatum? ?What exactly is the objective goal that arises from the ultimatum? What is at stake?
What is the impossible ultimatum? ?What exactly is the objective goal that arises from the ultimatum? What is at stake?
See lessA clerk at the age of 40, married and father of two kids realise his true passion for life and start to chase it along with fulfilling all his commitments and responsibilities.
What is his "true passion"? ?Collecting rare books? ?Fixing up and riding ?vintage Harley-Davidson ?motorcycles? ?Becoming a tattoo artist? ?The number of "true passions" a human being can have are probably as numerous as the number of people who exist. The ?logline needs state exactly what the trueRead more
What is his “true passion”? ?Collecting rare books? ?Fixing up and riding ?vintage Harley-Davidson ?motorcycles? ?Becoming a tattoo artist? ?The number of “true passions” a human being can have are probably as numerous as the number of people who exist. The ?logline needs state exactly what the true passion is for this character. ?And It needs to be stated in a form that clearly states and objective goal that develops from pursuing his “true passion”.
And what dramatic problem does it create? I’m guessing that pursuing his passion will collide with being a responsible father and husband ?– that’s the obvious plot trajectory. ?But I shouldn’t have to guess. It should be either stated or implicitly obvious from ?the logline.
And what are the stakes? ?Why MUST he do whatever he does? ?What is to be gained if he succeeds, lost if he fails?
See lessBLOODLUST When a peace-loving Hindu man witnesses his brother and girlfriend murdered in a convenience store robbery it triggers one of his past lives as an 8th Century Norse Berserker. Now he must fight to control the bloodlust before it destroys him and more innocent lives.
I agree with Nir Shelter that?the goal needs clarification. As stated, the logline focuses on the risk of collateral damage of his internal conflict and external struggle -- that innocents may suffer in the process. ?But it doesn't state what the external struggle is, what he must do for justice toRead more
I agree with Nir Shelter that?the goal needs clarification. As stated, the logline focuses on the risk of collateral damage of his internal conflict and external struggle — that innocents may suffer in the process. ?But it doesn’t state what the external struggle is, what he must do for justice to prevail. ?(Or is it a matter of pure blood lust revenge, ?the law be damned?)
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