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When their worlds fall apart over the same week, three disenchanted, cash-strapped girlfriends make a pact to attempt three wild ways to make it big ? and get rich – fast.
Agree with Dkpough1 on both the inciting incident and the resulting action. ?They are vague, need to be fleshed out with specifics. ?Desperation drives people do all kinds of ?wild and crazy things. ?What are the specific wild and crazy actions these desperate characters take?
Agree with Dkpough1 on both the inciting incident and the resulting action. ?They are vague, need to be fleshed out with specifics. ?Desperation drives people do all kinds of ?wild and crazy things. ?What are the specific wild and crazy actions these desperate characters take?
See lessA socially awkward author from New York City only leaves his apartment at night until he falls in love with an ambitious politician who is spending every day in front of a camera.
The logline sets up an interesting?odd couple romance.? The conflict is clear, but?the direction?the conflict is going to take after the inciting incident ("he falls in love with"), that is the plot, is left unsaid. So an introvert falls in love with an extrovert.? What must he do about it?? (TakenRead more
The logline sets up an interesting?odd couple romance.? The conflict is clear, but?the direction?the conflict is going to take after the inciting incident (“he falls in love with”), that is the plot, is left unsaid.
So an introvert falls in love with an extrovert.? What must he do about it?? (Taken literally, the logline doesn’t say it’s that the falling in love is mutual.?)? What action must the author take, contrary to his temperament, in spite of his social awkwardness? to find true love?
See lessWhen his memories are stolen and his life backup file altered, a security analyst must use clues hidden within his back up memories to recover a missing 3 weeks of his past that are the key to stopping a devastating attack.
Is there a ticking clock to add urgency as well as stakes? ?Say he has retained a fragment of memory about some impending catastrophe that he can only stop by recovering what has been stolen?
Is there a ticking clock to add urgency as well as stakes? ?Say he has retained a fragment of memory about some impending catastrophe that he can only stop by recovering what has been stolen?
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