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  1. Posted: December 29, 2016In: Crime

    Street level dealer wanting more from life plans to import her own product triggering kidnap, murder and a war she cannot survive.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 2, 2017 at 11:17 pm

    I agree with Nir Shelter. And in appealing "Pulp Fiction" it should be noted that ?Vincent is ?but one character in one thread of a multi-threaded story. The ?sympathetic character in "Pulp Fiction" is the down-on-his-luck boxer, Butch, ?who is has been ordered by the gang boss, Marsellus, to swalloRead more

    I agree with Nir Shelter.

    And in appealing “Pulp Fiction” it should be noted that ?Vincent is ?but one character in one thread of a multi-threaded story.

    The ?sympathetic character in “Pulp Fiction” is the down-on-his-luck boxer, Butch, ?who is has been ordered by the gang boss, Marsellus, to swallow his pride and throw a fight. ?He’s a character the audience can and does root for to succeed, to defy orders and escape with his life and the money. And Taratino embellishes his character by giving ?him an ironic “Save the Cat” moment; the boxer saves Marsellus from the Gimp.

    “Pulp Fiction” is a great film, a classic, but I think it’s a not an ideal model for a 1st script, for writers to appeal to when they are trying to breach the castle and break into the busjness. ?”Pulp Fiction” was Tarantino’s 3rd feature length script to sell — not the 1st. ?It’s the script he could sell after he had breached the castle, solidly established himself with the sale and commercial success of “Reservoir Dogs” and ‘True Romance”.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2016In: Crime

    Street level dealer wanting more from life plans to import her own product triggering kidnap, murder and a war she cannot survive.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 31, 2016 at 9:44 pm

    >>>I really don?t care if the audience likes her. So why should the audience care enough to watch the movie? Also, ?the drug deal in ?"Pulp Fiction" is only one element in a one thread of a multi-threaded script. ?It's not a central element around which everything in the story revolves. AsRead more

    >>>I really don?t care if the audience likes her.

    So why should the audience care enough to watch the movie?

    Also, ?the drug deal in ?”Pulp Fiction” is only one element in a one thread of a multi-threaded script. ?It’s not a central element around which everything in the story revolves. As seems to be the case in this story.

    But it’s your story. Whatever.

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2016In: Crime

    Street level dealer wanting more from life plans to import her own product triggering kidnap, murder and a war she cannot survive.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 31, 2016 at 1:11 pm

    A nickel and dime dealer in what? ?Crank? ?Cocaine? ?Pot? ? A synthetic opioid like oxycodone? ?I suggest that's a detail that needs to be included.Who doesn't want "more from life"? ?But everyone has their own custom-tailored dream for ?what constitutes"more from life". ?What is her biggest dream?ARead more

    A nickel and dime dealer in what? ?Crank? ?Cocaine? ?Pot? ? A synthetic opioid like oxycodone? ?I suggest that’s a detail that needs to be included.

    Who doesn’t want “more from life”? ?But everyone has their own custom-tailored dream for ?what constitutes”more from life”. ?What is her biggest dream?

    Also, she would initially be more sympathetic if she’s doing the wrong thing for a right reason. ?Like ?Walter White: ?it’s wrong that he wants to produce meth, but he’s doing it for the right reason, to provide for his family after his death from incurable cancer. ?The former is illegal but the latter is socially acceptable, a family value.

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