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  1. Posted: September 11, 2016In: SciFi

    After a ship is shot down on a remote desert planet, the surviving Marine’s only hope of survival, and getting off the planet, is in a nearby mining town which is being torn apart by two feuding gangs.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 12, 2016 at 8:50 am

    Putting on it another planet (Mars or whatever) raises all kinds of exposition issues. ?I still don't understand what's the dramatic point of putting the conflict on a remote planet.The primary dramatic problem he has to contend with, the core conflict of the plot, is arbitrating and/or exploiting tRead more

    Putting on it another planet (Mars or whatever) raises all kinds of exposition issues. ?I still don’t understand what’s the dramatic point of putting the conflict on a remote planet.

    The primary dramatic problem he has to contend with, the core conflict of the plot, is arbitrating and/or exploiting the feud. ? I don’t see anything in that core conflict that couldn’t occur on a remote part of the earth, say, an island in the Pacific or in the Australian Outback. ?IOW: ?I don’t’ (yet) see what locating it on another planet brings to the story. ?(And locating it on earth would ?reduce the production budget, require little or no CGI.)

    Just saying.

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2016In: SciFi

    After a ship is shot down on a remote desert planet, the surviving Marine’s only hope of survival, and getting off the planet, is in a nearby mining town which is being torn apart by two feuding gangs.

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    Added an answer on September 12, 2016 at 4:14 am

    >>After a ship is shot down...Does the hostile force that shot him down factor into the rest of the story? ?And if so, how in relation to the feuding gangs?

    >>After a ship is shot down…

    Does the hostile force that shot him down factor into the rest of the story? ?And if so, how in relation to the feuding gangs?

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  3. Posted: September 9, 2016In: Drama

    When his daughter’s rape-homicide case turns cold, a child psychologist gradually befriends a rehabbing pedophile (the prime suspect) to solicit his trust and a confession.

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    Added an answer on September 10, 2016 at 4:11 am

    Recluse's polish is an improvement. But why would a pedophile engage in rehab with the father of his victim? ?Or ever confess?

    Recluse’s polish is an improvement.

    But why would a pedophile engage in rehab with the father of his victim? ?Or ever confess?

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