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  1. Posted: August 14, 2016In: Thriller

    A young NSA Agent impersonates a government minister at a secret meeting on the global arms trade to terrorists. But when masked gunmen storm the building, their target is not the minister he impersonates, but the NSA Agent himself.

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    Added an answer on August 14, 2016 at 10:25 pm

    I suggest you might want to some research on the division of labor in US foreign intelligence. ?The NSA focuses on ?electronic surveillance.?A covert op like the one in the logline would be the work of the CIA, ?not the NSA.

    I suggest you might want to some research on the division of labor in US foreign intelligence. ?The NSA focuses on ?electronic surveillance.?A covert op like the one in the logline would be the work of the CIA, ?not the NSA.

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  2. Posted: August 13, 2016In: Horror

    A group of high school seniors head out to a lake house for a weekend to celebrate graduation. Things get out of hand after several of them begin using an illegal substance that opens the door for demonic possession and ultimately threatens their very existence.

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    Added an answer on August 13, 2016 at 9:08 pm

    The logline presents the characters as hapless, passive victims of circumstances "things get out of hand..." , "opens the door to demonic possession...", "threatens their very existence". ?A logline should describe how a protagonist proactively struggles against the adversity that befalls him.

    The logline presents the characters as hapless, passive victims of circumstances “things get out of hand…” , “opens the door to demonic possession…”, “threatens their very existence”. ?A logline should describe how a protagonist proactively struggles against the adversity that befalls him.

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  3. Posted: August 11, 2016In: Thriller

    A bloodthirsty psychopath traumatized by the murder of his mother forms a group of dangerous terrorists with the goal of avenging his mother and destroying the criminals and gangsters of his town. He is later ought to face a famous and intelligent detective.

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    Added an answer on August 12, 2016 at 9:37 pm

    Don't understand why the protagonist has to be a psychopath. ?If that's the way he is from FADE IN:, what's his character arc? I think it would be a stronger character arc, make for a more compelling story if he starts out as a normal, law abiding person who succumbs to the dark side of his nature wRead more

    Don’t understand why the protagonist has to be a psychopath. ?If that’s the way he is from FADE IN:, what’s his character arc? I think it would be a stronger character arc, make for a more compelling story if he starts out as a normal, law abiding person who succumbs to the dark side of his nature when he begins to engage in “street justice” after failing to get legal justice.

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