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Revised Logline…A young, bot obsessed girl, from an Australian/ Muslim family is a finalist for a Robotics Competition, but when her volatile, dysfunctional family smash her robot, she must rebuild it and her family to compete in a game that will put her to the ultimate test.
In the context of the protagonist's family, recent immigrants to a strange new land, ?traditions would be everything . ?That's the aspect of the story that most engages my interest, ?the clash between modernity and tradition, the old and the new. ? It's an authentic complication, a major obstacle thRead more
In the context of the protagonist’s family, recent immigrants to a strange new land, ?traditions would be everything . ?That’s the aspect of the story that most engages my interest, ?the clash between modernity and tradition, the old and the new. ? It’s an authentic complication, a major obstacle the protagonist will have to clear in her quest to go to college. ?It’s what differentiates the story, sets it apart from other stories of young women struggling to go to college.
My take:
After her father destroys her entry into a university robotics competition, an immigrant girl from a?traditional Muslim family defies her parents to build a second one to win an engineering scholarship.
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This is a film I would like to see. ?Best wishes with your script.
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