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A new actress in a year-round haunted house attraction falls for the resident ladykiller
And then what happens? ?The logline sets up a 1st Act situation but has no 2nd Act ?plot.As a result of falling in love for the "ladykiller", ?what becomes the woman's objective goal? ?What becomes the dramatic problem? ? What difference does it make to the actress as to how the relationship works oRead more
And then what happens? ?The logline sets up a 1st Act situation but has no 2nd Act ?plot.
As a result of falling in love for the “ladykiller”, ?what becomes the woman’s objective goal? ?What becomes the dramatic problem? ? What difference does it make to the actress as to how the relationship works out? ?Or to the audience — why should they care or be interested in what happens? ?What’s at stake?
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And as Nir Shelter pointed out, there's a whole franchise genre dedicated to stories about characters with special powers. ?What makes hers so special? ?And what specifically must she learn to do with them?Or else. ?What will happen to her and her world if she fails?
And as Nir Shelter pointed out, there’s a whole franchise genre dedicated to stories about characters with special powers. ?What makes hers so special? ?And what specifically must she learn to do with them?
Or else. ?What will happen to her and her world if she fails?
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As Nir Shelter said. ?The "extraordinary gift" is vague; it needs to be specific. ??And what is the inciting incident which ?leads her to realize she must use her "extraordinary gift"?
As Nir Shelter said. ?The “extraordinary gift” is vague; it needs to be specific. ??And what is the inciting incident which ?leads her to realize she must use her “extraordinary gift”?
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