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When a writer looking for a new story decides to follow people as way to find inspiration he soon realizes he has more interest in interfering with people’s lives than in simply watching them, which leads him to find a cult he wasn’t supposed to find and face the consequences.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn't doesn't lay out a plot, ?what causally follows from establishing his own cult. ?(And I'm not sure what kind of a cult it is-- religious or...?)What is the objective goal of his setting up a cult? ?To control other peoples' lives because he tRead more
The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t doesn’t lay out a plot, ?what causally follows from establishing his own cult. ?(And I’m not sure what kind of a cult it is– religious or…?)
What is the objective goal of his setting up a cult? ?To control other peoples’ lives because he thinks he knows better? ?To manipulate and exploit weak-minded and gullible people?
(As a side bar, what is your objective goal ?writing the story? ?To explore the psychology of exploiting people’s weaknesses and delusions?)
And who/what opposes him? ?Who/what threatens to defeat his purpose (whatever that is)?
And why is the story classified as a thriller? ?Seems more like a drama to me. It could even play out as a comedy, but a thriller?
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At 62 words, the logline is too long and too complicated to properly evaluate.? Please review the guidelines on constructing a proper guidelines under "Training" at the top of the web page.
At 62 words, the logline is too long and too complicated to properly evaluate.? Please review the guidelines on constructing a proper guidelines under “Training” at the top of the web page.
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And then what? ?The logline establishes an interesting platform, a situation, from which to launch a plot. ?But it doesn't launch a ?plot. What becomes the protagonist's objective goal? ?(BTW: characters need not be named in the logline.) ?Who/what opposes him? And the "so what?" factor: ?what's atRead more
And then what? ?The logline establishes an interesting platform, a situation, from which to launch a plot. ?But it doesn’t launch a ?plot.
What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal? ?(BTW: characters need not be named in the logline.) ?Who/what opposes him?
And the “so what?” factor: ?what’s at stake? ?What does he stand to gain if he succeeds, lose if he fails?
I suggest consulting the guidelines under “Training” at the top of the web page for tips on how to write a logline that launches a plot.
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