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A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.
I think your original logline, is very strong and what you are classing as backstory is also a v strong film premise. You could have a trilogy in here. You seem to know the backstory really well, so don't dismiss it, you can use that. as Part 1.
I think your original logline, is very strong and what you are classing as backstory is also a v strong film premise. You could have a trilogy in here. You seem to know the backstory really well, so don’t dismiss it, you can use that. as Part 1.
See lessA man planning to commit suicide becomes the soul survivor of a commercial jet airline crash plus the investigations number one suspect as a terrorist involved in bringing the flight down but most importantly he is reborn, discovering the things in life he previously thought of no value: love, empathy & revolution.
I was intrigued by your original logline, and after reading Richiev's 2nd shot logline I'd want to see this. The irony of the suicidal man being the survivor and then being pursued as the possible terrorist makes it intriguing and gripping. I would keep it simple and following this thread. Doesn't sRead more
I was intrigued by your original logline, and after reading Richiev’s 2nd shot logline I’d want to see this. The irony of the suicidal man being the survivor and then being pursued as the possible terrorist makes it intriguing and gripping. I would keep it simple and following this thread. Doesn’t sound sci-fi even tho it is futuristic. Good luck!
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