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  1. Posted: November 11, 2012In: Public

    So the Singularity happened. All because a guy lost his arm.

    earthwulf
    Added an answer on November 12, 2012 at 6:36 pm

    Thanks for that - I appreciate it. There is an antagonist, and it's not the initial AI or society (& not nanobots :) ), but one of the offspring of the first AI. It's about how the internal society of artificial intelligences (intelligentsia?)begins to work, form and self regulate, and does so bRead more

    Thanks for that – I appreciate it. There is an antagonist, and it’s not the initial AI or society (& not nanobots 🙂 ), but one of the offspring of the first AI. It’s about how the internal society of artificial intelligences (intelligentsia?)begins to work, form and self regulate, and does so before it’s really noticed by the outside world. The rogue AI is a serial killer of sorts, but killing of the other personalities, the other AIs. This is about the why of that and the repercussions both within the networks and on the outside of them.

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  2. Posted: November 11, 2012In: Public

    Jasmine Cowl is pissed: 15 ago, she managed to save the world. Now she?s stuck in a boring, life, working for the CIA… not that CIA, the other one. Disgruntled gnomes, talking islands, and a car that seems to have taken a life of its own force themselves into Jasmine?s life as a hunt for a powerful wand turns her life inside out.

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    Added an answer on November 12, 2012 at 4:59 pm

    Got it - thanks for the feedback. As I mentioned in my first log line for a separate project (too short by far), this one is too long. I need to massage it a bit & try to repost. Also, I did read a ton of Fforde, but it was years ago :)

    Got it – thanks for the feedback. As I mentioned in my first log line for a separate project (too short by far), this one is too long. I need to massage it a bit & try to repost. Also, I did read a ton of Fforde, but it was years ago 🙂

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  3. Posted: November 11, 2012In: Public

    So the Singularity happened. All because a guy lost his arm.

    earthwulf
    Added an answer on November 12, 2012 at 4:56 pm

    Ok: so my first attempt at a log line was too short, my second, too long. The Singularity is the moment when artificial intelligence becomes real. The hook I'm trying to build is that this happens when a guy loses an arm, and in the process of creating that arm he accidentally spawns the first AI.

    Ok: so my first attempt at a log line was too short, my second, too long. The Singularity is the moment when artificial intelligence becomes real. The hook I’m trying to build is that this happens when a guy loses an arm, and in the process of creating that arm he accidentally spawns the first AI.

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