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Granted one week to hunt down the true assassin, a lovesick hitman must execute his fiance on day seven when she unwittingly poisons his boss, the kingpin of crime.
There's additional consequences to the story, specifically the day seven part, ?that I've included in other versions of this. But I felt it may be too third Act-ish and irrelevant to the main idea presented here.?
There’s additional consequences to the story, specifically the day seven part, ?that I’ve included in other versions of this. But I felt it may be too third Act-ish and irrelevant to the main idea presented here.?
See lessTwo dim-witted best friends battle the internet and their conservative town to keep their porn shop open.
Hi CLSmith, Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though. An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop? And maybe considerRead more
Hi CLSmith,
Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though.
An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop?
And maybe consider making the “internet” and conservative town into one antagonistic force or entity. Like a technophobe Mayor who’s determined to quell your MCs’ internet erotica endeavors.
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A spy with a big mouth must destroy an enemy radar station before more planes are shot down.
Hi mop1011, As Richiev pointed out, the inciting incident is missing. Why must this big mouthed spy destroy an enemy radar station before more planes are shot down? What happens to make the MC take this course of action? And a spy with a?big mouth in my head sounds comical in a good way because of tRead more
Hi mop1011,
As Richiev pointed out, the inciting incident is missing. Why must this big mouthed spy destroy an enemy radar station before more planes are shot down? What happens to make the MC take this course of action?
And a spy with a?big mouth in my head sounds comical in a good way because of the irony. Unless you mean he’s a big mouth in that he’s brash and arrogant…
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