1. Posted: September 1, 2021In:

    After the death of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his drug addiction until he finds fulfillment in his long-forgotten passion: dancing

    eliasbaar Penpusher

    His addiction problem. I worked out a slighty different logline. What do you think about: "After the murder of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his addiction problem and leaves his old life to seek revenge." ...is it clearer know?

    His addiction problem. I worked out a slighty different logline.

    What do you think about: “After the murder of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his addiction problem and leaves his old life to seek revenge.”

    …is it clearer know?

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2021In:

    With no justice for the recent death of a gay dancer, a frustrated editor feels compelled to give his death meaning, while searching for his own.

    eliasbaar Penpusher

    Thank you this helps a lot!! I just thought of something similar... maybe they could have been secret lovers. Take care.

    Thank you this helps a lot!! I just thought of something similar… maybe they could have been secret lovers.

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2021In:

    With no justice for the recent death of a gay dancer, a frustrated editor feels compelled to give his death meaning, while searching for his own.

    eliasbaar Penpusher

    Thank you for your answer, Philippe, I'll think about it! Btw: if you're THE artist, I just checked your artworks and I'm a fan of it! Honored that you responded to my logline :-) Take care!

    Thank you for your answer, Philippe, I’ll think about it!

    Btw: if you’re THE artist, I just checked your artworks and I’m a fan of it! Honored that you responded to my logline 🙂

    Take care!

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