1. Posted: August 4, 2021In:

    When a naive and shy young man loses his humanity to an evil futuristic corporation, he tries to destroy it to free himself and others with the questionable help of two sides, good and evil, from which he finds no difference.

    eliasbaar Penpusher

    I like the idea of the two sides good and evil, from which he finds no difference!!

    I like the idea of the two sides good and evil, from which he finds no difference!!

    See less
    • 1
  2. Posted: August 3, 2021In:

    In a male-dominated town, a frustrated editor attends to self-help groups for men, not to seek help but to prepare himself against them.

    eliasbaar Penpusher

    Thank you! He doesn't know the gay dancer personally but he finds a sublime beauty in him and a resemblance to himself, so he takes it personally... Do you have an idea how to put that into the logline? :D

    Thank you! He doesn’t know the gay dancer personally but he finds a sublime beauty in him and a resemblance to himself, so he takes it personally… Do you have an idea how to put that into the logline? 😀

    See less
    • 1
  3. Posted: August 3, 2021In:

    In a male-dominated town, a frustrated editor secretly attends self-help groups for men to prepare himself against them after the death of a gay dancer.

    eliasbaar Penpusher

    Thank you very much! This is very helpful. I was thinking the same thing about the "after the death of a gay dancer", even for me it sounded a bit random, but I didn't come up with something better yet. So thank you for the feedback! Take care.

    Thank you very much! This is very helpful. I was thinking the same thing about the “after the death of a gay dancer”, even for me it sounded a bit random, but I didn’t come up with something better yet. So thank you for the feedback!

    Take care.

    See less
    • 0