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  1. Posted: August 22, 2015In: Public

    After gaining superpowers, a group of clumsy and incompetent young adults set out to become the world?s first supervillains, but must first gain control over their city from the corrupt, but powerful superheroes who protect it.

    Eli Teirelinck Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 23, 2015 at 4:38 pm

    The corrupt heroes are not villains, they just aren't good people. What i mean is that they are not protecting the city out of the goodness of their heart, but because they are getting paid to do it and would gladly stand by and watch the city burn if there's nothing in it for them. They have not doRead more

    The corrupt heroes are not villains, they just aren’t good people. What i mean is that they are not protecting the city out of the goodness of their heart, but because they are getting paid to do it and would gladly stand by and watch the city burn if there’s nothing in it for them. They have not done anything evil to anyone ever and have only done good for the city, but, atleast in my mind, just because a person does good does not make them a good person. Their morality can be swayed.
    In this world, the heroes fight petty criminals and gangs, stop meteors and such, not other super powered beings, hence the group would have been the first SUPER villains.

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  2. Posted: January 10, 2015In: Public

    After taking human form, getting married, and having a child of his own, the ancient child eating (though newly reformed) Boogeyman must protect his oblivious human family when he suspects a new monster may lurking under the bed of his son….planning to out the horrible secret of his past life.

    Eli Teirelinck Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 11, 2015 at 11:09 am

    I like that revision, but I thought it should be important to note in the log line that 1) the boogeyman has turned human and 2) his human family are unaware that he was the boogeyman and that he has eaten many children. Should I just drop that from the log line? Too much detail?

    I like that revision, but I thought it should be important to note in the log line that 1) the boogeyman has turned human and 2) his human family are unaware that he was the boogeyman and that he has eaten many children. Should I just drop that from the log line? Too much detail?

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  3. Posted: January 10, 2015In: Public

    After taking human form, getting married, and having a child of his own, the ancient child eating (though newly reformed) Boogeyman must protect his oblivious human family when he suspects a new monster may lurking under the bed of his son….planning to out the horrible secret of his past life.

    Eli Teirelinck Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 11, 2015 at 11:09 am

    I like that revision, but I thought it should be important to note in the log line that 1) the boogeyman has turned human and 2) his human family are unaware that he was the boogeyman and that he has eaten many children. Should I just drop that from the log line? Too much detail?

    I like that revision, but I thought it should be important to note in the log line that 1) the boogeyman has turned human and 2) his human family are unaware that he was the boogeyman and that he has eaten many children. Should I just drop that from the log line? Too much detail?

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