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When his meth lab burns down, a rising drug lord must erase evidence from a laptop before the DEA finds it.
Well, that makes more sense, but it should read: '....a rising drug lord must destroy evidence on a laptop that is stored in the police evidence room.' Sure, you know what the film is about now.
Well, that makes more sense, but it should read: ‘….a rising drug lord must destroy evidence on a laptop that is stored in the police evidence room.’ Sure, you know what the film is about now.
See lessWhen his meth lab burns down, a rising drug lord must erase evidence from a laptop before the DEA finds it.
Well Karel, I think you are ignoring your own rule here. Isn't the laptop in the lab and doesn't it burn down with everything? And if not, then who has the laptop? Was it stolen before the fire or at the time of the fire? Was the fire started by a nemesis character who was maybe a DEA agent? It coulRead more
Well Karel, I think you are ignoring your own rule here. Isn’t the laptop in the lab and doesn’t it burn down with everything? And if not, then who has the laptop? Was it stolen before the fire or at the time of the fire? Was the fire started by a nemesis character who was maybe a DEA agent? It could be a good action thriller, but I don’t see the story yet.
See lessA futuristic, oppressive & decadent state demands teenagers for their blood sport. Making a resourceful girl take her little sister’s spot to kill to survive ‘the hunger games’.
Hi Justin. I find this logline very confusing. Who is the hero? I presume it's the resourceful girl. What makes her so resourceful and what happens that she decides to take her sister's place? Is the blood sport a coming of age thing? Who is the opponent? An official of the state or the whole systemRead more
Hi Justin. I find this logline very confusing. Who is the hero? I presume it’s the resourceful girl. What makes her so resourceful and what happens that she decides to take her sister’s place? Is the blood sport a coming of age thing? Who is the opponent? An official of the state or the whole system? See what I mean? Confusing. Need a bit more specificity. Could be a great yarn.
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