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  1. Posted: November 15, 2012In: Public

    The President's Chopper crashes over enemy's territory, he must fight his way out or be killed.

    ElizabethBan
    Added an answer on November 19, 2012 at 7:37 pm

    Interesting idea, but I think we've seen this movie in several incarnations. I don't see anything new about it, except the helicopter. If the helicopter crashes, it can't fight anymore, so there's no novelty. Sorry to be a downer. I like Richiev's suggestion of an aspiring VP though, but still....

    Interesting idea, but I think we’ve seen this movie in several incarnations. I don’t see anything new about it, except the helicopter. If the helicopter crashes, it can’t fight anymore, so there’s no novelty. Sorry to be a downer. I like Richiev’s suggestion of an aspiring VP though, but still….

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  2. Posted: November 18, 2012In: Public

    Revision: An unhappy couple enters the Wife Carrying Contest, per the request of a young rookie psychologist, in hopes that it will revitalize their marriage.

    ElizabethBan
    Added an answer on November 19, 2012 at 7:29 pm

    I like the last version, but does it convey what the movie is about. It's still missing something for me. Sorry, I can't put my finger on it.

    I like the last version, but does it convey what the movie is about. It’s still missing something for me. Sorry, I can’t put my finger on it.

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  3. Posted: November 11, 2012In: Public

    A doctor battles his fear of needles to rescue his daughter from a former physician, the source of his phobia, bound to his daughter by blood.

    ElizabethBan
    Added an answer on November 12, 2012 at 8:32 pm

    I agree with everything that has been said before, but I don't think that overall it would be very helpful for Lucius. I looked at the other (4) versions and perhaps the logline could go along the lines of: When a sadistic madman threatens the lives of his daughter and her schoolmates, a doctor mustRead more

    I agree with everything that has been said before, but I don’t think that overall it would be very helpful for Lucius. I looked at the other (4) versions and perhaps the logline could go along the lines of:

    When a sadistic madman threatens the lives of his daughter and her schoolmates, a doctor must find a way to overcome his own fears and save the children.

    Does this make sense?

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