1. Posted: October 12, 2013In:

    The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

    Elly Field

    Thanks for asking - the feel I am trying to convey is a Goonies type scenario - but more along the mystery solving front. Main inspiration to the characters is The Red Hand Gang..

    Thanks for asking – the feel I am trying to convey is a Goonies type scenario – but more along the mystery solving front. Main inspiration to the characters is The Red Hand Gang..

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  2. Posted: October 12, 2013In:

    The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

    Elly Field

    Thanks Karel - this is my first log line so I appreciate your input. I think I was hoping the log line would help me cement some of the plot you have asked about lol. I do need to nail it down as you're right it does sound too generic. So far the villain has escaped from prison and is hiding out inRead more

    Thanks Karel – this is my first log line so I appreciate your input. I think I was hoping the log line would help me cement some of the plot you have asked about lol. I do need to nail it down as you’re right it does sound too generic. So far the villain has escaped from prison and is hiding out in the town where he stashed his loot. The year was important to me because the kids to want to emulate their favourite tv show of the time – Red Hand Gang. Unfortunately I have more about the B plot and the characters than the A plot right now. Any help is gratefully received!

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2013In:

    After two boys disappear from an abandoned RAF fighter station – eighteen years apart – they find themselves back in time fighting for their country and flying for their lives during the Battle of Britain

    Elly Field

    I wonder if you need to be so time specific...maybe saying something like 'at separate times' you could avoid the break in the flow of your sentence?

    I wonder if you need to be so time specific…maybe saying something like ‘at separate times’ you could avoid the break in the flow of your sentence?

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