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In a bid to search for her missing brother in Nepal, a Cambodian socialite poses as a doctor in a local earthquake relief mission. And as the location of his last known location draws closer, she comes to learns the preciousness of human relationships but must also come to terms with the possibility of her brother’s death.
thank you.! back to the board!
thank you.! back to the board!
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I find that your character goals and motivations are not properly defined. - Between the nephew and the vampire, who is the main protagonist? - Does the nephew know that his uncle was the one who sent the assassins? - Why does his uncle want to kill him? I think that the nephew and the vampire fallRead more
I find that your character goals and motivations are not properly defined.
– Between the nephew and the vampire, who is the main protagonist?
– Does the nephew know that his uncle was the one who sent the assassins?
– Why does his uncle want to kill him?
I think that the nephew and the vampire fall in love first and then is caught in between when his uncle sends killers to kill the vampire.
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Thank you DK for taking the time to comment. I have already completed the first draft of my short story, and to be honest, the story is everything that you mentioned. Your feedback goes a long way to concentrate on?the interesting part.. THANKS!
Thank you DK for taking the time to comment. I have already completed the first draft of my short story, and to be honest, the story is everything that you mentioned. Your feedback goes a long way to concentrate on?the interesting part..
THANKS!
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