I’d like to be more emotionally drawn in. What are the motivations and consequences here? For instance, why did the cyborg general frame the sky-runner? Why do the gang of orphans rescue him? Maybe he’s a sci-fi equivalent of a Nike celebrity, getting richer as the poor adore his celebrity and buy the products he endorses. Are there any shocking revelations the athlete encounters? He might be surprised by the poverty, but maybe he discovers some long-lost relatives living in the slums, and in the process he has to become truer to himself. I realize a log line has to be short, but maybe there’s a way to inject some more emotional motivation into the storyline.