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Thanks all for the help. Re working it now.
Wouldn't being attacked by an alien as the inciting incident?? At least to me that is the intent.? The goal would be to survive unless that's to vague but also to discover who she is and who the aliens are.? Trying to keep it simple but intriguing.? not always so easy.
Wouldn’t being attacked by an alien as the inciting incident?? At least to me that is the intent.? The goal would be to survive unless that’s to vague but also to discover who she is and who the aliens are.? Trying to keep it simple but intriguing.? not always so easy.
See lessWhen a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects a superhero, he breaks out of prison to create a cure for the woman he loves.
Was thinking the same thing about the superhero.? What kind of superhero?? Seems a little strange a superhero gets sick, not that it can't happen.? I guess if you gave superman kryptonite soup, he would get sick.? I'm also not sure if the bio terrorist is trying to save his girlfriend the superhero?Read more
Was thinking the same thing about the superhero.? What kind of superhero?? Seems a little strange a superhero gets sick, not that it can’t happen.? I guess if you gave superman kryptonite soup, he would get sick.? I’m also not sure if the bio terrorist is trying to save his girlfriend the superhero??? To me Bio Terrorist means he is the bad guy, does this mean the superhero is bad also?
See lessThanks all for the help. Re working it now.
I think you could be right about the defending the town, it's not really important at all.? The end is hopefully the hook, not sure if it's makes you want to watch or just confuses you.?? Cleaned up the logline a bit more.An alternate logline that I've been working on is: While trying to discover heRead more
I think you could be right about the defending the town, it’s not really important at all.? The end is hopefully the hook, not sure if it’s makes you want to watch or just confuses you.?? Cleaned up the logline a bit more.
An alternate logline that I’ve been working on is:
See lessWhile trying to discover her birth father, an impulsive dancers hunted by unrelenting aliens species, as she endeavors to defend herself she discovers they may just be family.