1. Posted: May 1, 2016In:

    The highest graded kid in the class dies in a drug overdose. Two kids, one kid is a redneck christian who believes God gave him knowledge even though he’s not very smart and another one is an emo columbine kid who is also not very smart wants this to feel validation. They now cheat tests,.

    Erica Samurai

    Not really sure what's going on after reading the logline or how the first part even ties in with anything.? It's like 3 different thoughts put together.

    Not really sure what’s going on after reading the logline or how the first part even ties in with anything.? It’s like 3 different thoughts put together.

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  2. Posted: May 1, 2016In:

    In a small town, an embittered young male struggles with the beliefs of a little girl who thinks the old man in a Santa suit is Santa while he robs a bank on Christmas Eve.

    Erica Samurai

    Not really,? the girl is too young.? Maybe I should put that in the logline, an 8 year old little girl.? That doesn't mean I can't add a romance element with the girls mom.? I'll have to explore that option.

    Not really,? the girl is too young.? Maybe I should put that in the logline, an 8 year old little girl.? That doesn’t mean I can’t add a romance element with the girls mom.? I’ll have to explore that option.

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  3. Posted: May 1, 2016In:

    Thanks all for the help. Re working it now.

    Erica Samurai

    Okay, this makes sense, thank you for your help.? I'll continue to work on it.

    Okay, this makes sense, thank you for your help.? I’ll continue to work on it.

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