1. Posted: July 31, 2016In:

    When an image conscious love expert falls for the wrong guy, a crass hacker geek, her page views plummet, forcing her ruthless producer to manipulate her insecurities to tear them apart. 31 Words (Revised) (RomCom)

    Erica Samurai

    I love romantic comedies, but this log line left me scratching my head.? The second part seamed to come from out of nowhere.? Usually in RC, you have either the two who fall in love coming from opposite sides that break them apart until they can overcome this hurdle (You've got Mail, Pretty Women)?Read more

    I love romantic comedies, but this log line left me scratching my head.? The second part seamed to come from out of nowhere.? Usually in RC, you have either the two who fall in love coming from opposite sides that break them apart until they can overcome this hurdle (You’ve got Mail, Pretty Women)? or it’s a close friend, ex lover that tries, but usually is really only a small hurdle.?? Don’t over complicate the logline or story.

    Two business rivals who hate each other in the office fall in love over the Internet.? – You’ve got mail.

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2016In:

    An orphaned young woman discovers she’s only half human when an Alien warrior is unleashed on earth to destroy the only weapon capable of stopping the forthcoming invasion, her.

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    Erica Samurai

    Not sure if I'm getting any closer yet but I thought I would try this one out: A high school senior finds herself in a struggle to stop an Alien Warrior unleashed on earth to destroy a weapon capable of stopping the forthcoming invasion, a half-breed human, her

    Not sure if I’m getting any closer yet but I thought I would try this one out:

    A high school senior finds herself in a struggle to stop an Alien Warrior unleashed on earth to destroy a weapon capable of stopping the forthcoming invasion, a half-breed human, her

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2016In:

    In search of her origins, a confused young woman learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, however not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA

    Erica Samurai

    Thanks for the comment Naven, here' s slight variation again: In search of her origins, a orphaned young? women learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, who's not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien Warrior and a greedy corporation after herRead more

    Thanks for the comment Naven, here’ s slight variation again:
    In search of her origins, a orphaned young? women learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, who’s not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien Warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA

    Not sure between the words, confused, which I like and orphaned.

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