1. Posted: January 31, 2017In:

    When a nostalgic unemployed returns to Greece to prevent the sale of his beloved grand parents house, he meets his sandbox love as a badass broker who needs every cent during the financial crisis.

    Erica Samurai

    I'm a little confused on what a "nostalgic unemployed" is.? Also I'm not sure what is meant by "sandbox love".? I think this may have a potential for a cute romantic story, but, I'm a little unclear by the wording right now. When his grand parents house goes up for sale,? a sentimental but unemployeRead more

    I’m a little confused on what a “nostalgic unemployed” is.? Also I’m not sure what is meant by “sandbox love”.? I think this may have a potential for a cute romantic story, but, I’m a little unclear by the wording right now.

    When his grand parents house goes up for sale,? a sentimental but unemployed man returns to Greece to prevent the lose only to fall in love with the broker who is selling it.

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  2. Posted: January 26, 2017In:

    Aliens in need of a battlefield chose earth for their war, now in the remnant of the devastating war; a suicidal man must find a reason to save humanity, which is facing extinction.

    Erica Samurai

    I'm confused and not buying into why an Alien species would be in need of a battlefield and choose earth.? If they are capable so space flight, what would earth hold that they need?? Wouldn't it be better for them to choose a planet without life so your not fighting on two battlefronts?

    I’m confused and not buying into why an Alien species would be in need of a battlefield and choose earth.? If they are capable so space flight, what would earth hold that they need?? Wouldn’t it be better for them to choose a planet without life so your not fighting on two battlefronts?

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  3. Posted: January 26, 2017In:

    When an agoraphobic author meets his dream girl, a country star, he starts a therapy, but he must join her in public appearances or risks losing her to smarter guys.

    Erica Samurai

    I'm never a fan of words that have to be looked up in a logline.? I'm sure some people would know what agoraphobic is but it's risky.? I'm not sure about this sentence, "he starts a therapy"? What does this mean?? Why must he join her in public appearances?? Is he here therapist now?

    I’m never a fan of words that have to be looked up in a logline.? I’m sure some people would know what agoraphobic is but it’s risky.? I’m not sure about this sentence, “he starts a therapy”? What does this mean?? Why must he join her in public appearances?? Is he here therapist now?

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