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When his life unravels, a selfish, high school Jock is given a chance of redemption when he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches. p.s I’m trying something a bit different … 2 log lines based on the same premise. This one is a comeuppance tale of Jerk transformed to Good Guy. The next submission is Loser to Hero…. Your thoughts on both or either please. And which transformation do you prefer? which logline is the most ironic?
I like the concept.? For the most part I think the logline works, but I'm not sure about the beginning,? When his life Unravels, part,?? Seems like it's missing something, but still might work.? Not sure.
I like the concept.? For the most part I think the logline works, but I’m not sure about the beginning,? When his life Unravels, part,?? Seems like it’s missing something, but still might work.? Not sure.
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So this is a new short script I'm just finishing, I'm kind of brainstorming the logline right now.? I think it's weak at the moment but I need something to springboard idea's off of.? The story is a Family/SciFi.
So this is a new short script I’m just finishing, I’m kind of brainstorming the logline right now.? I think it’s weak at the moment but I need something to springboard idea’s off of.? The story is a Family/SciFi.
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"Sure. But it?s up to the film studios/producers to decide if my screenplay is worthy, not people on a website dedicated to logline writing. It?s totally out of place. Not to mention the fact that you are judging a movie idea without even reading the script. Let me worry about the writing and the stRead more
“Sure. But it?s up to the film studios/producers to decide if my screenplay is worthy, not people on a website dedicated to logline writing. It?s totally out of place. Not to mention the fact that you are judging a movie idea without even reading the script. Let me worry about the writing and the story. You can either help with my logline or not.”
I’m guessing you’ve never pitched a script before.? Getting in the front door is based on a logline.? The studio’s DO JUDGE a movie idea on a logline or pitch and not always the script.? If the idea or logline doesn’t peak there interest, it will simply be a pass.? Getting a reaction from people about your idea including websites like this is a great way to judge how your project will be precised.
If you want to be in the business, you will have to learn to take criticism and rejection.?? That’s just part of being a writer or anything in the movie business.? If you get into a meeting you have to be prepared to answer tough question like this or even simply ones.? Most like a the first thing a producer will as you from a pitch/logline like this, what makes this different from the one we are making or others that have been made?
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