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A girl obsessed with UFO’s builds a small device to alert us, when the device goes off during a storm she encounters a strange figure.
Well to give away the spoiler/story,? she ends up slipping from a platform during the story after seeing a strange small figure.? she never really gets a good look at it.? Next she?s? in the hospital in a coma, so now for a few pages it?s about the father.? So it?s not really a true shift of the proRead more
Well to give away the spoiler/story,? she ends up slipping from a platform during the story after seeing a strange small figure.? she never really gets a good look at it.? Next she?s? in the hospital in a coma, so now for a few pages it?s about the father.? So it?s not really a true shift of the protag, but the father is there dealing with the fact that he?s never around as much as he would like to be due to work.? At this point it?s a short 14 page short script.
See lessA girl obsessed with UFO’s builds a small device to alert us, when the device goes off during a storm she encounters a strange figure.
I should add, at the start of the story, she really wants to see a UFO or meet an alien, that's her want.? So her building the "UFO Detector" is a way for her to accomplish that want.? Now she is only 12, but smart.? Her dad supports her, he just can't be there all the time even though he wants to bRead more
I should add, at the start of the story, she really wants to see a UFO or meet an alien, that’s her want.? So her building the “UFO Detector” is a way for her to accomplish that want.? Now she is only 12, but smart.? Her dad supports her, he just can’t be there all the time even though he wants to be.? Work gets in the way.
See lessWhen he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches, a lovelorn but clueless teen has one week to win his true love before she leaves for college.
This one give us more, but I actually like the other one better.? For me after reading the other one, I chuckled a little, thinking this would be cute to watch.? I like the start of this one and this one does add some stakes.
This one give us more, but I actually like the other one better.? For me after reading the other one, I chuckled a little, thinking this would be cute to watch.? I like the start of this one and this one does add some stakes.
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