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  1. Posted: February 27, 2017In: SciFi

    Update: When a night of UFO watching goes terribly wrong, a 12-year-old aspiring astronaut makes contact in a way she never expected. (SciFi/Family)

    Erica Samurai
    Added an answer on March 1, 2017 at 1:07 am

    "When a 12 year old?terminal cancer patient who aspires?to become an?astronaut is granted a tour of the international space station, He?unexpectedly finds himself at?ground?zero of?humanity?s first recorded contact with?extra terrestrials." Interesting, but not really my story at the moment.? ThankRead more

    “When a 12 year old?terminal cancer patient who aspires?to become an?astronaut is granted a tour of the international space station, He?unexpectedly finds himself at?ground?zero of?humanity?s first recorded contact with?extra terrestrials.”

    Interesting, but not really my story at the moment.? Thank you though for the suggestion.

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  2. Posted: February 27, 2017In: SciFi

    Update: When a night of UFO watching goes terribly wrong, a 12-year-old aspiring astronaut makes contact in a way she never expected. (SciFi/Family)

    Erica Samurai
    Added an answer on February 27, 2017 at 5:50 am

    I've updated the logline which I believe works better.? I don't want to do a bait and switch, was never my intention.

    I’ve updated the logline which I believe works better.? I don’t want to do a bait and switch, was never my intention.

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2017In: SciFi

    A girl obsessed with UFO’s builds a small device to alert us, when the device goes off during a storm she encounters a strange figure.

    Erica Samurai
    Added an answer on February 23, 2017 at 2:25 pm

    "If sighting the alien is the inciting incident, what dramatic question, stated in one sentence, does that raise that the rest of the plot will answer ? or at least hint at an answer?" Hmm, I'm going to have to say, will she survive.? I don't know if that works, but I'm going to have to re evaluateRead more

    “If sighting the alien is the inciting incident, what dramatic question, stated in one sentence, does that raise that the rest of the plot will answer ? or at least hint at an answer?”

    Hmm, I’m going to have to say, will she survive.? I don’t know if that works, but I’m going to have to re evaluate the script maybe.

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