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An alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
Well...I'm confused. I'm at 39 words. All of the things I'm being asked to do will raise - not lower - that count. Slaying demons isn't to be taken literally. I'm just saying he must deal with his own personal issues which have contributed to his alcoholism. I get the part about focusing on his centRead more
Well…I’m confused. I’m at 39 words. All of the things I’m being asked to do will raise – not lower – that count. Slaying demons isn’t to be taken literally. I’m just saying he must deal with his own personal issues which have contributed to his alcoholism. I get the part about focusing on his central goal, which would be to rescue his pilot, but to do so requires he slay his demons and reassemble his crew. I can see leaving out the daughter thing but giving the how and the why for the journey will skyrocket the word count. I thought the idea was to inspire curiosity. I feel like I’m being asked to tell too much. But thanks for the feedback!
See lessAn alcoholic former ship captain must slay his own demons as he reassembles his ragtag crew to embark on one last mission: rescue his long-thought-dead pilot and unite him with the daughter he never knew he had.
Well...I'm confused. I'm at 39 words. All of the things I'm being asked to do will raise - not lower - that count. Slaying demons isn't to be taken literally. I'm just saying he must deal with his own personal issues which have contributed to his alcoholism. I get the part about focusing on his centRead more
Well…I’m confused. I’m at 39 words. All of the things I’m being asked to do will raise – not lower – that count. Slaying demons isn’t to be taken literally. I’m just saying he must deal with his own personal issues which have contributed to his alcoholism. I get the part about focusing on his central goal, which would be to rescue his pilot, but to do so requires he slay his demons and reassemble his crew. I can see leaving out the daughter thing but giving the how and the why for the journey will skyrocket the word count. I thought the idea was to inspire curiosity. I feel like I’m being asked to tell too much. But thanks for the feedback!
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