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An extroverted overweight attorney-turned-actress falls in love with an introverted younger personal trainer and embarks on a life-changing romance. Even though they both know from the beginning that they want different things in life and their time together is limited, they risk their hearts to learn from each other until it is time to say goodbye.
Thank you so much for your comments. I am going to edit the logline to make the characters more specific. As to drama, neither want "'til death do us part" but fall so deeply in love the idea of parting (even though it is best for both of them) is too painful to consider. I will work that in as wellRead more
Thank you so much for your comments. I am going to edit the logline to make the characters more specific. As to drama, neither want “’til death do us part” but fall so deeply in love the idea of parting (even though it is best for both of them) is too painful to consider. I will work that in as well. Would love your feedback after the edits!
See lessAfter an explosion, a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times, his mission is to lead the group to recover artifacts spread in different times in history and avoid an alien invasion in the future.
Great description, I can really see it. To make it easier to read, I would change it to this: "A marine wakes up after an explosion with people from other times. He leads the group to recover artifacts from different times in history to avoid an alien invasion in the future."
Great description, I can really see it. To make it easier to read, I would change it to this: “A marine wakes up after an explosion with people from other times. He leads the group to recover artifacts from different times in history to avoid an alien invasion in the future.”
See lessWhen lonely long-haul truck driver D Forde falls in love online with a city writer and single mother, he must cross more than the Nullarbor to overcome his fear of abandonment and win her heart.
Great logline! For me, I think having "D Forde" in it is unncessary and clutters it a bit. Also, not sure what Nullarbor is so may want to substitute a more generic word for that one.
Great logline! For me, I think having “D Forde” in it is unncessary and clutters it a bit. Also, not sure what Nullarbor is so may want to substitute a more generic word for that one.
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