1. Posted: September 28, 2013In:

    A laid-back man-child?s quest to get rich quick is disrupted when he becomes the legal guardian of a pugnacious twelve year old girl.

    eswheeler

    I think this could be really funny. I just have a question about your wording. A laid back man child's quest. Is it the laid back man's kid who wants him to be the legal guardian? Are there two kids? I have g o admit I had to look up the word pugnacios but once I did the word fit perfectly.

    I think this could be really funny. I just have a question about your wording. A laid back man child’s quest. Is it the laid back man’s kid who wants him to be the legal guardian? Are there two kids? I have g o admit I had to look up the word pugnacios but once I did the word fit perfectly.

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  2. Posted: September 23, 2013In:

    An inhibited accountant who detest musicals struggles to remain sane when he wakes up in a world where everybody sing and dance.

    eswheeler

    I love every thing about this story. I would watch it if it were made into a movie.

    I love every thing about this story. I would watch it if it were made into a movie.

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  3. Posted: September 25, 2013In:

    When an author encounters the characters he writes in the real world, creating a number of awkward and humorous moments, he must help them assimilate or return to the stories they belong in.

    eswheeler

    I love the idea of storybook characters in the real world. Like in the book Inkheart. My only suggestion would be don't say awkward and humorous...show it.

    I love the idea of storybook characters in the real world. Like in the book Inkheart. My only suggestion would be don’t say awkward and humorous…show it.

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