1. Posted: May 19, 2018In:

    When a disillusioned married woman is absorbed by a surrealist painting, she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting before becoming part of it, while falling in love with a man of painting.

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    etatsecond Logliner

    I don't know what happened but here is the original logline before my correction: In an exhibition, after a woman enters a painting, her boyfriend must look for the painter before he leaving the exhibition.?

    I don’t know what happened but here is the original logline before my correction:

    In an exhibition, after a woman enters a painting, her boyfriend must look for the painter before he leaving the exhibition.?

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2012

    "After years away, lonely Darren Ashcroft returns to his tiny home village to win back his childhood sweetheart only to be told she never existed."

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    Wow, I like it! But I agree with what StellaAurora says

    Wow, I like it! But I agree with what StellaAurora says

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  3. Posted: May 9, 2018In:

    A man having an affair with a married woman discovers his wife is having an affair with her husband.

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    It sound interesting a comedy about that. You have a plot point but not the protagonist's motivation... what should he do? what must he do? Why did he do that?? You can add an adjective? that answer that, for example; a stressed man or a party man. I hope I helped.

    It sound interesting a comedy about that. You have a plot point but not the protagonist’s motivation… what should he do? what must he do? Why did he do that?? You can add an adjective? that answer that, for example; a stressed man or a party man. I hope I helped.

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