Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A knight assembles a clandestine operation in order to rescue the princess of Jerusalem from the infamous king during the crusades.
I think his logline is about the plan more than the action of rescuing. I think It could be like this: ...during the crusades, a knight must rescue a princess to save her kingdom before they kill her. Because the plan could be shown in a scene, however it is not about the plan or yes? (sorry if my eRead more
I think his logline is about the plan more than the action of rescuing. I think It could be like this: …during the crusades, a knight must rescue a princess to save her kingdom before they kill her.
See lessBecause the plan could be shown in a scene, however it is not about the plan or yes?
(sorry if my english is bad)
When a young woman falls in love with a pet shop worker, she must escape her animal cult family.
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don't get it. I think? you should write the protagonist's risk, for example: ... She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped. (sorry for my english,Read more
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don’t get it.
See lessI think? you should write the protagonist’s risk, for example: … She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped.
(sorry for my english, It is not very good)
Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine ?Mankind? and ?Humanity? on a recreated Earth.
It sounds great but I can not find the protagonist of your story, so it is empty in that sense. Also... Whose is mother? The mother is a very important character to be in the story??
It sounds great but I can not find the protagonist of your story, so it is empty in that sense.
See lessAlso… Whose is mother? The mother is a very important character to be in the story??