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  1. Posted: November 11, 2012In: Public

    An idealistic priest is hunted by Church agents after he uncovers a plot to release a virus that targets non believers.

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2012 at 2:48 pm

    In a world increasingly pitted by the polarity between religion and atheism, I think the story gets its fair chance at the screens. That said, you might want to determine in earnest where to stand between "uncovers" and discovers". The former could take after the priest unassumingly having to mentioRead more

    In a world increasingly pitted by the polarity between religion and atheism, I think the story gets its fair chance at the screens.

    That said, you might want to determine in earnest where to stand between “uncovers” and discovers”.

    The former could take after the priest unassumingly having to mention it in an ethics column he handles in a provincial Christian newspaper; then the church authorities find out about that particular column edition.

    The latter could take after church agents deciding to go after the priest after he naively mentioned it to a stranger ex-FBI operative he wasn’t aware of in a monitored phone conversation, before now his fingerprints having been found on the locker of the digital safe where research documents on the virus are kept.

    It’s easily any writer’s cut. Good one. Go for it.

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  2. Posted: November 10, 2012

    The MI6 is troubled by the possible existence of a voice technology that could recreate all human speeches ever made.

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2012 at 1:16 pm

    But I would readily think pointing out a protagonist in the logline for a story with a complex plot would make it sound like a cliche. It actually was intentional. And then, having the usual habit of limiting myself to 40-word loglines for my stories emphasizes economy, coolness, distinction, edge-oRead more

    But I would readily think pointing out a protagonist in the logline for a story with a complex plot would make it sound like a cliche. It actually was intentional.

    And then, having the usual habit of limiting myself to 40-word loglines for my stories emphasizes economy, coolness, distinction, edge-of-the-seat suspense and direct communication.

    I owe it to the movie agent and the eventual movie-goer to become instantly connected to the story once reading out what it’s all about in a short sentence.

    You can be sure that the story is less of discovering speech patterns and more of reproducing all these words we’ve all been typing here if only those words were speeches.

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  3. Posted: November 10, 2012

    The MI6 is troubled by the possible existence of a voice technology that could recreate all human speeches ever made.

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2012 at 12:57 pm

    I'll search out the DSD piece. "Cyber" is a word with a high frequency in that MI6 story. I have somewhat a certain feeling that 40 years from now, it would be a common prefix for many things humans would use as everyday tools. Be it mini-computers or an encyclopedia for human genome.

    I’ll search out the DSD piece. “Cyber” is a word with a high frequency in that MI6 story. I have somewhat a certain feeling that 40 years from now, it would be a common prefix for many things humans would use as everyday tools. Be it mini-computers or an encyclopedia for human genome.

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