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A drop-dead gorgeous mute is bartered into a harem where beauty is a death sentence and she must find her voice to survive.
Do mutes often find their voices? So they kill beautiful people? That's different. Run with it. But why? A hot chick who can't talk? Sounds like a win win -- ;) Ha.
Do mutes often find their voices? So they kill beautiful people? That’s different. Run with it. But why?
A hot chick who can’t talk? Sounds like a win win — 😉 Ha.
See lessFallen in love with Christ, a young Muslim girl finds out that her existence depends upon her recognition of the truth – she’s in love with a non-existent person – her seek for truth only leads her to reveal her true nature – goodness and curiosity – questions asked and answered, her seek – immortality.
Eliminate the specific faiths for the purpose of the logline... A young girl looks to another faith, but immediately finds that her mortality may lie with a false deity.
Eliminate the specific faiths for the purpose of the logline…
A young girl looks to another faith, but immediately finds that her mortality may lie with a false deity.
See lessFallen in love with Christ, a young Muslim girl finds out that her existence depends upon her recognition of the truth – she’s in love with a non-existent person – her seek for truth only leads her to reveal her true nature – goodness and curiosity – questions asked and answered, her seek – immortality.
It also reads very clunky. I'd work on the flow to smooth en out the hook. Eliminate the names, Neero and Sara are unfamiliar to me, adjectives work better in loglines.
It also reads very clunky. I’d work on the flow to smooth en out the hook. Eliminate the names, Neero and Sara are unfamiliar to me, adjectives work better in loglines.
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