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“They say first impressions are the most important. Luckily, twelve-year-old geek, Gordon Periwinkle gets a second.” A reluctant geek looks to create a new image when he is the new kid in school. After he fails miserably, he gets a second chance to re-live that week, this time he takes a completely different path while fully knowing the outcome of each previous decision.
Agree with variable. Where are the stakes in this story? Also, how is he given a 2nd chance and why is that relevant to the story?
Agree with variable. Where are the stakes in this story? Also, how is he given a 2nd chance and why is that relevant to the story?
See lessThe true story of how a motley crew pulled off England’s biggest bank heist only to discover they were set up by MI5 to retrieve scandalous photos of a royal person.
"What, really, is lost by not designating a protagonist? " I proceed that a log should suggest to a star talent what the story would mean for them if they were to sign up. I don't like mentioning "shady used car person" The original version is best in my mind, but why not chop the photo reveal to "cRead more
“What, really, is lost by not designating a protagonist? ”
I proceed that a log should suggest to a star talent what the story would mean for them if they were to sign up.
I don’t like mentioning “shady used car person”
The original version is best in my mind, but why not chop the photo reveal to “compromising info?”
See lessAfter her student goes missing, the teacher in-charge sets up a “search and rescue” with his best friends before their field trip ends.
I would set up the environment first, While on an extended field trip... Or, Before the conclusion of their field trip... ...has until the parents expect them to return.
I would set up the environment first,
While on an extended field trip…
Or,
Before the conclusion of their field trip…
…has until the parents expect them to return.
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