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When her plants succumb to a disease, a mute girl, haunted by visions, must find resistant seeds in a violent post-apocalyptic world.
Paul, this all over the place. Disease, seeds, hauntings, mute girls... Basically, what must this unfortunate and loner girl accomplish before the worst case scenario occurs? Does she need to befriend others to do it?
Paul, this all over the place. Disease, seeds, hauntings, mute girls…
Basically, what must this unfortunate and loner girl accomplish before the worst case scenario occurs? Does she need to befriend others to do it?
See lessWhen her husband is murdered, a headstrong businesswoman must turn to a tortured past and deadly skills to hunt down the killer and save her own life.
Not caring for how "turn to a tortured past" sounds in this. I'd omit it and just use her past skills as this will slightly shorten the log. To find the killer or seek revenge? Is she next or can she walk away from this? When her husband is murdered, a businessman woman must recall and use her forgoRead more
Not caring for how “turn to a tortured past” sounds in this. I’d omit it and just use her past skills as this will slightly shorten the log.
To find the killer or seek revenge? Is she next or can she walk away from this?
When her husband is murdered, a businessman woman must recall and use her forgotten skills to beat the killer at his own game.
See lessWhen a grieving widow learns her husband took a bullet intended for her, she must survive long enough to discover who wants her dead.
Indicates to me that the antagonistic assassins in this story are inept right from the git go. They fail on the target and give up on the pursuit only to risk another try?In Kill Bill, they left her hopelessly dead. The only reason to consider it done correctly.You can easily fix this by adjusting tRead more
Indicates to me that the antagonistic assassins in this story are inept right from the git go. They fail on the target and give up on the pursuit only to risk another try?
In Kill Bill, they left her hopelessly dead. The only reason to consider it done correctly.
You can easily fix this by adjusting the Protag from “grieving” to something more suited for a potential hero.
That would be a good place to start.
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