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  1. Posted: October 23, 2012In: Public

    In a bankrupt city, with jobs on the line, old George and Phil must compete to be the fastest garbage men they've ever been. The young new guys are fast, but are they smart?

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    Added an answer on October 24, 2012 at 7:34 am

    The only one that comes to mind, Geno, is 1990's Men At Work. This is more like Grumpy Old Men At Work, haha. But seriously, I think the setting and characters definitely hint at fun, but as far as story I think Kriss raises some interesting points. It needs to be bigger. Right now it sounds like thRead more

    The only one that comes to mind, Geno, is 1990’s Men At Work. This is more like Grumpy Old Men At Work, haha. But seriously, I think the setting and characters definitely hint at fun, but as far as story I think Kriss raises some interesting points. It needs to be bigger. Right now it sounds like the best these old guys can hope to achieve is holding on to a job that doesn’t sound all that desirable to begin with. What if the old guys have to find a way to work with their rivals to accomplish something greater?

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  2. Posted: October 21, 2012In: Public

    Two college students venture to a forgotten place to find the truth about it?s past. The horror they find there is as old as time, and just as hungry.

    frankiefigs
    Added an answer on October 23, 2012 at 9:02 am

    What separates your story from The Ruins? Try to include that unique element. Also, hungry as time?

    What separates your story from The Ruins? Try to include that unique element. Also, hungry as time?

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