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  1. Posted: July 10, 2013In: Public

    Short Film: A frustrated white collar man, unintentionally undergo a comical journey of social scrutiny and conditioning experiences in the park, leading to his awakening/revelation about the society.

    fredozindo
    Added an answer on July 10, 2013 at 10:57 am

    uhhh... stereotyping people, what the assumptions are about people and how our behaviours (and vice versa) effecting each other that was risen as a result of our conception about people creates consequences and so on, except in this film, in a short amount of time, he is transformed as he learn fromRead more

    uhhh… stereotyping people, what the assumptions are about people and how our behaviours (and vice versa) effecting each other that was risen as a result of our conception about people creates consequences and so on, except in this film, in a short amount of time, he is transformed as he learn from such encounters from many different people and how their identity are more than what the stereotypes suggest.

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2013In: Public

    Short Film: A frustrated white collar man, unintentionally undergo a comical journey of social scrutiny and conditioning experiences in the park, leading to his awakening/revelation about the society.

    fredozindo
    Added an answer on July 10, 2013 at 10:33 am

    The protagnoist is running out of marketing ideas in his job and about to get fired unless he come up with a new idea. He's taking an extended lunch break, instead of escaping from chaos of work. Unintentionally, our human nature to label, scrutinise, and conditioning (from ourselves or not) to sterRead more

    The protagnoist is running out of marketing ideas in his job and about to get fired unless he come up with a new idea. He’s taking an extended lunch break, instead of escaping from chaos of work. Unintentionally, our human nature to label, scrutinise, and conditioning (from ourselves or not) to stereotype people(a.k.a consumers) in the park end him up in the centre of it all somehow (of course, with a help of a minor and random antagonist that became the catalyst for his epiphany), from the encounters of seemingly random yet crucial target markets. The moral pressure he unintentionally learn as well as his work pressure weirdly enough gave him an awakening/revelation about the society, making him see beyond just consumers (stereotypes), but rather more as for what they are “human beings”, a double edged epiphany (marketing and morality).

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  3. Posted: July 8, 2013In: Public

    A wrongly convicted inmate volunteers for a hibernation experiment in exchange for one day of parole every five years, which he uses to prove his innocence and search for his missing daughter across an increasingly futuristic landscape.

    fredozindo
    Added an answer on July 10, 2013 at 1:00 am

    same ^ as the comment above, it might work for a TV series better, but plotwise, not compacted enough to work as a feature. However it does not diminish the possibility at all. The possibility I see must revolve around the significance of the protagonist's relationship with the family position againRead more

    same ^ as the comment above, it might work for a TV series better, but plotwise, not compacted enough to work as a feature. However it does not diminish the possibility at all.

    The possibility I see must revolve around the significance of the protagonist’s relationship with the family position against the ever changing society. If it was to be a feature, it only works best with few grand themes, few eras, and longer parole period only.

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