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  1. Posted: January 12, 2014In: Public

    "When a high school student’s negative emotions manifest in the form of other students, he will have to vanquish each one before they spread their emotions and cause complete chaos."

    KnowledgeKnight
    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 12:17 pm

    Not sure at this point the mixture of male and female projections. I don't think it would matter if there was a female projection coming out of a male body, because it is an emotion and emotions are not gender specific. By the way the emotions are Guilt (dressed in white), Anger (dressed in red), DeRead more

    Not sure at this point the mixture of male and female projections. I don’t think it would matter if there was a female projection coming out of a male body, because it is an emotion and emotions are not gender specific. By the way the emotions are Guilt (dressed in white), Anger (dressed in red), Depression (dressed in blue), Pain (dressed in yellow), and fear (dressed in black).
    Thanks for responding back so quickly. I see your comments everywhere on this site. You really are a blessing to the creative community. 🙂

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  2. Posted: January 12, 2014In: Public

    "When a high school student’s negative emotions manifest in the form of other students, he will have to vanquish each one before they spread their emotions and cause complete chaos."

    KnowledgeKnight
    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 11:56 am

    Thanks for the feedback dpg! I understand what you are trying to say about the consequence not directly effecting him. Lets see....how about: "When a high school student's negative emotions manifest themselves as other students, he will have to come to terms with the greatest enemy of all: himself,Read more

    Thanks for the feedback dpg! I understand what you are trying to say about the consequence not directly effecting him. Lets see….how about:
    “When a high school student’s negative emotions manifest themselves as other students, he will have to come to terms with the greatest enemy of all: himself, in time to prevent his slip into insanity.”
    (REWRITE people ^^^)

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2014In: Public

    (1600’s, Action/Comedy) After losing his parents to bandits, Spaniard San?o and his servant Pan?o goes after a wild treasure hunt with the map San?o stole from the bandits.

    KnowledgeKnight
    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 8:13 am

    Well, why do they go on the treasure hunt right after his parents have died? Are they trying to get back at the bandits for the death of Sanco's parents? Suggestion: "After losing his parents to bandits, Sanco and his servant Panco find a map on the bandits' bodies and go on a wild treasure hunt." GRead more

    Well, why do they go on the treasure hunt right after his parents have died? Are they trying to get back at the bandits for the death of Sanco’s parents?
    Suggestion: “After losing his parents to bandits, Sanco and his servant Panco find a map on the bandits’ bodies and go on a wild treasure hunt.”
    Good Luck!

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