1. Posted: September 3, 2017In:

    When a village wizard is kidnapped by his power hungry brother, his accident-prone niece must learn to trust her abilities and save her uncle, before his energy is used to release a malevolent power.

    Gabe Logliner

    Thanks guys, that makes sense I.e to focus on the external action in the logline. Cheers. Dpg, I agree I definitely think 'malevolent' is vague, but I'm using it because I'm not sure how I can signify the entity without actually describing it, which will go over the word limit. I suppose that's' theRead more

    Thanks guys, that makes sense I.e to focus on the external action in the logline. Cheers.

    Dpg, I agree I definitely think ‘malevolent’ is vague, but I’m using it because I’m not sure how I can signify the entity without actually describing it, which will go over the word limit. I suppose that’s’ the skill, though, heh.

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  2. Posted: August 28, 2017In:

    After the world’s military is wiped out by an advanced inter-dimensional civilisation, a group of mis-fit ex-marines must put their differences aside and work together to save humanity from their alien overlords.

    Gabe Logliner

    Thanks for all the feedback really appreciate it, guys!

    Thanks for all the feedback really appreciate it, guys!

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2017In:

    When a wretched teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz camp realizes his infatuation with Hitler?s daughter since their encounter in his village, by sneaking in her villa he stands to confess his love and induce her to save the Jews escape from the Germans.

    Gabe Logliner

    Perhaps Hitler's daughter ?falls in love with him? That would make for an inciting incident , where the protagonist could leverage her love to help save the Jews. The growing tension would be he has a lover in the camps with him who he tries to hide from Hitler's daughter to keep her helping him.

    Perhaps Hitler’s daughter ?falls in love with him? That would make for an inciting incident , where the protagonist could leverage her love to help save the Jews. The growing tension would be he has a lover in the camps with him who he tries to hide from Hitler’s daughter to keep her helping him.

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