Hey guys, I really appreciate the feedback and the time giving it. In terms of the story actually working , that’s something I prefer to figure out while I’m writing the synopsis and delving into research, although I do appreciate you flagging it dpg – it’s not something one should underestimate. Re. the logline, thanks, Dkpough1, yea I think perhaps a little more detail of how the scientist is going to go about harnessing the earth’s core, might be beneficial. Because I’m using loglines as development tools at this point, I’m really trying to make sure I have a handle on them so that I have solid a foundation and direction, for my stories. I’m getting a lot of value from all your feedback, thank you.