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  1. Posted: November 11, 2013In: Public

    A woman possessed by self-interest and greed, becomes architect of her own demise. Her grasp for power and money engulfs her in a web of sex, murder and corruption.

    gawebster Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 16, 2013 at 8:31 pm

    Revised this to read as follows - welcome feedback: A powerful woman using all available assets to control people to increase her wealth, learns at her cost her assistant has greater ambitions, and a real flair for corruption and murder.

    Revised this to read as follows – welcome feedback:

    A powerful woman using all available assets to control people to increase her wealth, learns at her cost her assistant has greater ambitions, and a real flair for corruption and murder.

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  2. Posted: November 11, 2013In: Public

    A woman possessed by self-interest and greed, becomes architect of her own demise. Her grasp for power and money engulfs her in a web of sex, murder and corruption.

    gawebster Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 12, 2013 at 5:52 pm

    Thanks yes does help. Will rework with your comments in mind. Appreciate the feedback.

    Thanks yes does help. Will rework with your comments in mind. Appreciate the feedback.

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  3. Posted: November 10, 2013In: Public

    When an elderly man sues a large bank for foreclosing on him due to a data error, he dies of a heart attack in court, and his daughter then brings a wrongful death suit against the same bank.

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2013 at 4:38 pm

    Maybe develop the error into something more critical to the banks very survival that they want hushed up. Otherwise unfortunately I would struggle to understand why the bank would give a damn.

    Maybe develop the error into something more critical to the banks very survival that they want hushed up. Otherwise unfortunately I would struggle to understand why the bank would give a damn.

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