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When a policeman\'s family is kidnapped by a sadistic crime lord he must kill the chief of police, his father in law, to save them.
Thanks guys both excellent comments and I'll use the advice in both of them
Thanks guys both excellent comments and I’ll use the advice in both of them
See lessA newly divorced mother of two risks losing the support of her ex-husband and two daughters when she pursues an alternative family with a butch graphic designer who inspires her to move the way her pulse beats and finally be herself
Better but should you mention that it's a relationship with the other women, kinda sounds like a love story in the first draft, you want to let us know is it a buddy movie or a love story, the original sounded Like a love story between two women, the latest one could be a buddy story
Better but should you mention that it’s a relationship with the other women, kinda sounds like a love story in the first draft, you want to let us know is it a buddy movie or a love story, the original sounded Like a love story between two women, the latest one could be a buddy story
See lessA newly divorced mother of two risks losing the support of her ex-husband and two daughters when she pursues an alternative family with a butch graphic designer who inspires her to move the way her pulse beats and finally be herself
This is too long with too much going , is it about the conflict between her old family or about her growing into this new person, which is more important. I know that both these elements are part of your story but it needs to be shorter, maybe "a divorcee risks losing the support of her family whenRead more
This is too long with too much going , is it about the conflict between her old family or about her growing into this new person, which is more important. I know that both these elements are part of your story but it needs to be shorter, maybe “a divorcee risks losing the support of her family when she pursues a relationship with another women who inspires her to be herself”. Hope this helps and good luck
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