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A desperate CEO’s legally ambiguous plans to save his company are undermined when he is blackmailed by a mysterious ex-employee.
I wanted to comment because I really like this logline and the sense of the tension in this movie. I can see the others' comments are phenomenal. My two cents is that CEOs can range from multi-billion dollar corporations to work-from-home operations. Corporations grow, flounder, fail, hold steady, iRead more
I wanted to comment because I really like this logline and the sense of the tension in this movie. I can see the others’ comments are phenomenal. My two cents is that CEOs can range from multi-billion dollar corporations to work-from-home operations. Corporations grow, flounder, fail, hold steady, innovate, or whatever.?Usually when we think of CEOs we think of the rich and powerful, but that’s not always the case. I’m not sure I would use “benevolent” to describe the company as much as I would indicate the size or scope of the company: global, Fortune 500, up-n-coming, for example because each category of corporation conjures a different sense of conflict. An old, rich, powerful CEO functions differently than a from-the-ground-up entrepreneurial hot shot. I just craved a little more detail in that sense. I would also consider naming the industry if it has any relation to the story or characters.
See lessA man encounters a violent, time-traveling version of himself from 10 years in the future and the dangerous group of people determined to bring them both down.
This sounds like a mind-bending action flick. It would be cool if the logline made it clearer as to who is "A man" to give a a sense of his background, skills, flaws, or conflicts when he meets his violent, future self. Same thing for the "group of people." It leaves too much to the imagination. AnRead more
This sounds like a mind-bending action flick. It would be cool if the logline made it clearer as to who is “A man” to give a a sense of his background, skills, flaws, or conflicts when he meets his violent, future self. Same thing for the “group of people.” It leaves too much to the imagination. An angry mob of anarchists? A roller derby team? A motorcycle gang? A few more details can change the sense of the film and the imagery. Cool concept though and I could see people getting excited about seeing this movie.
See lessAn international smuggling maverick risks everything on an project that could catapult him into the big leagues, if his competition doesn't catch up with him first..
Thanks. Yes I wish I could edit out the typos. Didn't realize that revisions were impossible until it was too late. That won't happen again. Overall good criticism while indicating a good understanding of the tone or type of story implied. Even though there's room for improvement, it's good to knowRead more
Thanks. Yes I wish I could edit out the typos. Didn’t realize that revisions were impossible until it was too late. That won’t happen again.
Overall good criticism while indicating a good understanding of the tone or type of story implied. Even though there’s room for improvement, it’s good to know it conveyed the right message.
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