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A young wife seeks revenge after catching her husband cheating, and with the help of her eccentric friends, creates an online business that names and shames unfaithful men.
"But then..." What is the main conflict after that? What happens after the business is established? Do they get death threats? Do they uncover the USA President as an adulterer? What must they do? What is the main ACTION? Also (you don't have to put it in the logline) think about the inner journey:Read more
“But then…” What is the main conflict after that? What happens after the business is established? Do they get death threats? Do they uncover the USA President as an adulterer?
What must they do? What is the main ACTION?
Also (you don’t have to put it in the logline) think about the inner journey: she starts as bitter and vengeful. Does she end up as forgiving? As independent? Does she find somebody else? Doesn’t she also discover unfaithful women? Does her business protect those? Does she have a moral dilemma over this? (I’m riffing, here.)
See lessA dead husband waits to be reunited with his wife, but he isn’t the only one waiting.
To avoid a passive character: get him to actually do something for his wife to come to him, in the afterlife. It can a special prayer or a spell or an arrangement with God or the Devil or a sacrifice. He may choose to spend 1000 years in hell just to be with her for the rest of eternity. But then, tRead more
To avoid a passive character: get him to actually do something for his wife to come to him, in the afterlife. It can a special prayer or a spell or an arrangement with God or the Devil or a sacrifice. He may choose to spend 1000 years in hell just to be with her for the rest of eternity.
But then, there is a twist: she comes with another man. Who is this man and why she chose to die with him is up to you.
Finally, what must he do to win her back? The Action.
See lessWhen her older husband dies of viagra overdose, leaving her cuffed on the bed frame, a sexually frustrated woman must break free or die alone in their isolated lake house.
I am not particularly crazy with "sexually frustrated woman." A big revelation in the movie is her memory that she was abused by her father. Also, the whole cuffs on the bed is a rape fantasy her husband puts her through, without her will, so should I say "sexually abused woman?"
I am not particularly crazy with “sexually frustrated woman.” A big revelation in the movie is her memory that she was abused by her father. Also, the whole cuffs on the bed is a rape fantasy her husband puts her through, without her will, so should I say “sexually abused woman?”
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