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  1. Posted: April 24, 2020In: SciFi

    “After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a self-sabotaging math genius is forced, along with a team of hand-picked misfits, to? maintain a bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it.” Title: ‘Revelations’ – 1 Hour Scifi TV Pilot

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    Added an answer on April 24, 2020 at 10:42 am

    Other Options for hero adjectives: ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a drug addicted mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain their bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it". ??Read more

    Other Options for hero adjectives:

    ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a drug addicted mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain their bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it”.

    ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a disgraced mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain their bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it”.

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2020In: SciFi

    “After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a self-sabotaging math genius is forced, along with a team of hand-picked misfits, to? maintain a bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it.” Title: ‘Revelations’ – 1 Hour Scifi TV Pilot

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    Added an answer on April 24, 2020 at 10:29 am

    Second Attempt: ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a famously reclusive mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain their bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it".  

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    ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a famously reclusive mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain their bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it”.

     

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2019In: Coming of Age

    After discovering his new and only friend?s family relies heavily on government handouts, a sheltered teenager struggles against his privileged upbringing and his parent?s ideals to maintain this relationship.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2019 at 6:54 am

    Hi Mike,Pretty solid logline. Nice work. My only input would be to think about giving your protagonist a bigger obstacle in life, something the audience would feel more sympathy for other than the issues caused by a privileged upbringing. I chose stutter below, as maybe the new friend helps him contRead more

    Hi Mike,

    Pretty solid logline. Nice work. My only input would be to think about giving your protagonist a bigger obstacle in life, something the audience would feel more sympathy for other than the issues caused by a privileged upbringing. I chose stutter below, as maybe the new friend helps him control that but you could be any impediment. This logline is a bit to long and wordy but you get the idea. Any just a thought.

    “A social outcast because of his stutter, a teenager discovers his first real friend’s family relies heavily on government handouts and desperately struggles to maintain the friendship as his privileged upbringing and parents ideals threaten to destroy it.”

    Johnny

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